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 Winter in San Francisco, Dec. 13, 2008.
Winter in San Francisco, Dec. 13, 2008.
Its attic opens its window
Replies only a falling leaf
Skies leaving on a jet plane
Sun sets west fires, turns clouds into
Simmering coal
The lamp in my room is
Then getting brighter
金山之冬 2008.12.13
屋子開了窗口
唯落葉回答
天空以噴射機離去──
西夕的紅火，把雲燒成了
碳
屋子裡的燈
漸漸亮了
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| William Zhou周道模 ?2009-01-15 15:02:48?? |  |
纯景描写，情寓景中！
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| Lake ?2009-01-15 18:02:43?? | |
Is it winter? Nah, it sounds autumn in our place.
Beautifully written.
Lake
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| kino ?2009-01-16 00:35:11?? | |
欣赏。觉得第一句还是中文更传神。
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| Lake ?2009-01-16 05:24:49?? | |
A friend sent this to me today. I think this is more appropriate. Stay warm!
WINTER Poem
It's winter in Minnesota
And the gentle breezes blow
Seventy miles an hour
At thirty-five below.
Oh, how I love Minnesota
When the snow's up to your butt
You take a breath of winter
And your nose gets frozen shut.
Yes, the weather here is wonderful
So I guess I'll hang around
I could never leave Minnesota
I'm frozen to the ground!
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| 博弈 ?2009-01-16 06:12:25?? | |
“I could never leave Minnesota
I'm frozen to the ground! ”
Sarcastically subtle in a tender heart, like it.
However,
I went to LA last weekend, I was snowed by
the T-shirt overflow by the street banks.
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