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五律*秋日寄怀

万里河梁别，相思不得闻。
春风吹乱绪，碧水动秋氛。
笔下随时意，梦中何处云！
清宵多寂寞，诗瘦尽缘君。
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'诗瘦尽缘君",不袭用"衣带渐宽"之说,自是别开生面.

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女中豪杰-四妹 ?2008-08-24 20:07:56?? Reply with quote


问候 祝好 欣赏

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