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???the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins

胡礼忠2010-11-15 05:21:45

拜访老师、颂冬祺!

Lake2010-01-16 09:05:12

Thank you.

我家三儿2010-01-07 05:21:39

我叫太阳每天把幸福的阳光洒在你身上,我叫月亮每天给你一个甜美的梦境,祝愿你事事如意! 

Lake2008-11-04 11:04:13

Thanks.

hepingdao2008-11-04 10:52:29

congratulations!
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Tanka

1
grass pushes
through the breeze
and the melting snow
listening to the birds
I miss your spring verse

2
a fresh wind flirts
this long-awaited sun
my legs race
along a gurgling creek
leaving winter behind

3
helpless on the couch
my once vigorous father
points to the clivia
that unfurls its petals
in the morning dew

4
along the floor board
on the carpet a wet stain
where mould grows
day by day, a young heart
gradually filled with mildew

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钓月 ?2008-04-17 16:32:51?? 引用并回复


Beautiful verses.

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William Zhou周道模 ?2008-04-19 16:53:09?? 引用并回复


动感,画面,人景,寓意,联想。

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Lake ?2008-04-27 18:16:07?? 引用并回复


Thanks 钓月.

Thanks William. I need to lean these terms from you.
Smile

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