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杯中冲浪 ?2007-12-03 04:18:59?? Reply with quote


还不错，但感觉凝练不足。

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溪语 ?2007-12-03 04:51:31?? Reply with quote


如果让我躲进玉米编织的森林里
逃避钢铁的追杀
那不如在冬天未到之前
我在我的路上选择抗争或死亡

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