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北美枫文集
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????? ?????月光泉 查找白水发表的所有帖子 冷雨2011-10-06 02:16:37问好临屏！
我想看到的就是古韵袅袅，其他的对我并不重要。 冷雨2010-12-24 06:15:09问候白水，圣诞节快乐！！
清源留字 亿七维2010-05-29 13:43:04问好白水！ 李盈枝2009-12-17 01:10:58过来拜读先生的新诗佳作，希望能从中汲取营养，以提高自己旧体诗词的习作水平。顺便向先生问好并致意。 君山楚女2009-11-22 15:55:12问候白水忘年兄。读您的作品，主我眼前一亮，慧心灵动。一篇好作品，一个好老师，确实能点破愚顽。 梦之2009-08-19 14:44:54向姐姐问好！ 很欣赏你的作品。
梦之 zmj1662009-08-17 02:34:36问好白水！ 万春来2009-06-13 16:49:42问候白水兄，前来问候！ 莹雪2009-06-07 16:35:14问好姐姐  |
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| 白水 ?2007-08-25 08:12:48?? |  |
WOW, YOU WRITE THE ENGLISH POEM SO FAST. COULD YOU TRANSLATE IT FROM ENGLISH TO CHIENES. I WISH EVERY ONE CAN READ IT. 
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| nobody ?2007-08-25 08:24:41?? | |
哈哈，打油诗，不是刚写的。我可没有你手快。
就不用翻了，用的都是最最简单的单词。自己觉得还有一点点意思。 
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| 白水 ?2007-08-25 08:33:28?? | |
好吧, 尊重你的意见.
不过, 你这首小诗的意境真不错
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| 白水 ?2007-08-25 08:36:58?? | |
瞧这乱, 我刚删了我的翻译.好在我的老鼠抓着呢, 再贴上吧
试译, 接近原意吗?
我是灵魂
你是谁?
我四处漂泊
你在哪儿居住?
哦, 你是知名人士
哦, 你住在附近
这很好
真的很好
什么?
你想悄悄逼近
我觉得灵魂挺好, 既无影, 又不要人间虚名 
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| nobody ?2007-08-25 08:39:10?? | |
你可真快，我还正说不呢。译的不错，如第一段。nobody和nowhere双关，不好译。我尝试更忠实原来的试下，加上注释会好些。
我是“无名“ （没人知道在意的人，或无形之存在。不拥有物质的人，也许更拥有灵魂）
你是谁?
我居“无处“ （没地方住，或不需要地方住）
你住哪?
哦, 你是“某人“ （指有点身份的人，或确切之存在）
哦, 你住“某处“ （指较高尚的地方）
不错
真的不错
什么?
你想搬进来？（我这穷困之人，会有怎样的吸引力让你想靠近？你想弃你豪居，跟我挤这陋至极致之所？物质不能满足，人需追求灵魂）
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| 白水 ?2007-08-25 08:45:13?? | |
你怎么又把帖删了? 别人以为白水在对空气说话呢 
尊重原作. 的确, 双语互译时会丢掉一些精华部分. 更喜欢英文版.
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| nobody ?2007-08-25 09:05:30?? | |
没删，忙着解释翻译呢。原文简练，翻译过来得解释半天。
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| Lake ?2007-08-25 18:01:29?? | |
| nobody 写到: |
I'm nobody
Who are you?
I live nowhere
Where do you live?
Oh, you are somebody
Oh, you live somewhere
That's good
That's pretty good
What?
You want to move in? |
After nobody:
You’re nobody?
Who’s nobody?
You live nowhere?
Where is nowhere?
Yeah, I’m nobody
Yeah, I live nowhere
You got it?
Did you really get it?
Nobody lives nowhere
That’s all about it.
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| nobody ?2007-08-25 20:08:46?? | |
| Lake 写到: |
| nobody 写到: |
I'm nobody
Who are you?
I live nowhere
Where do you live?
Oh, you are somebody
Oh, you live somewhere
That's good
That's pretty good
What?
You want to move in? |
After nobody:
You’re nobody?
Who’s nobody?
You live nowhere?
Where is nowhere?
Yeah, I’m nobody
Yeah, I live nowhere
You got it?
Did you really get it?
Nobody lives nowhere
That’s all about it. |
哈哈，有趣。谢谢。
It's been an interesting talk between nobody who lives nowhere and somebody who lives somewhere.
Yeah, I'm nobody
But I have a name
Do you?
Yeah, I live nowhere
But I have an address
Do you?
My name, and my address
Are written in a book
That lasts, though invisible
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| Lake ?2007-08-25 20:45:11?? | |
| nobody 写到: |
| Lake 写到: |
| nobody 写到: |
I'm nobody
Who are you?
I live nowhere
Where do you live?
Oh, you are somebody
Oh, you live somewhere
That's good
That's pretty good
What?
You want to move in? |
After nobody:
You’re nobody?
Who’s nobody?
You live nowhere?
Where is nowhere?
Yeah, I’m nobody
Yeah, I live nowhere
You got it?
Did you really get it?
Nobody lives nowhere
That’s all about it. |
哈哈，有趣。谢谢。
It's been an interesting talk between nobody who lives nowhere and somebody who lives somewhere.
Yeah, I'm nobody
But I have a name
Do you?
Yeah, I live nowhere
But I have an address
Do you?
My name, and my address
Are written in a book
That lasts, though invisible |
Well, everybody is somebody
Be it a screen name or a real name
Everywhere is somewhere
Be it in the web or the hell
Why hide yourself as nobody
And your home as nowhere
A book doesn’t last
but the verse immortal
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