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lulu ?2009-03-15 03:34:20?? Reply with quote


冰清 wrote:
梦中苦觅,故地神游。
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谢冰清老师的雅赏雅评!lulu给您问好!
近来较忙,未能及时回复您,见谅!请您多多指教!
是的,大连是个好地方,海滨城市,风光秀丽,地处辽东半岛的最南端,东濒黄海,西临渤海,南与山东半岛隔海相望,并与日本、韩国、朝鲜和俄罗斯远东地区相邻,享有”北方明珠“的称号。
欢迎您常去大连转转,挥洒您的妙笔,尽情书写诗意人生!

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qinghongh ?2009-03-15 04:24:44?? Reply with quote


lulu wrote:
qinghongh wrote:
写出了大连好风光。但34,56句的颔联和腹联全是名词,建议作些修改。欢迎lulu回到诗坛!

谢庆宏老师雅赏雅评!lulu给您问好!
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lulu,修改后增色很多。

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lulu ?2009-03-15 05:05:42?? Reply with quote


qinghongh wrote:
lulu wrote:
qinghongh wrote:
写出了大连好风光。但34,56句的颔联和腹联全是名词,建议作些修改。欢迎lulu回到诗坛!

谢庆宏老师雅赏雅评!lulu给您问好!
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lulu,修改后增色很多。

谢庆宏老师的表扬!学生还要不断努力呀!请您多多指教!

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米运刚 ?2009-03-24 18:05:59?? Reply with quote


前些年朋友约游大连,苦于教学任务重,而暑假太热寒假又太冷,终未成行。待到退休后,请lulu作个向导,领略一下你笔下的美景。

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lulu ?2009-03-28 00:58:54?? Reply with quote


米运刚 wrote:
前些年朋友约游大连,苦于教学任务重,而暑假太热寒假又太冷,终未成行。待到退休后,请lulu作个向导,领略一下你笔下的美景。

lulu给 作家+诗人 问好!您太有才了!谢谢光临指导!
学生还请米老师在诗词古韵方面多给lulu指点!谢谢!Welcome to Dalian!

西蜀袍哥毅志刚,
闲来运米不愁荒,
神游南北挥平仄,
留下贤妻去战狼。

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