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| Lake ?2009-09-10 05:43:13?? |  |
Hi Mr. Zhang,
I'm hesitant to point this out for I don't want to interfere with the reader's interpretation and your translation makes good sense (or even better than the original) even if there are a few places which are a bit off with the original. But here's one: "tresses", I meant a lock of long hair, especially a woman's hair.
Thanks for asking.
Lake
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| 张南城 ?2009-09-10 22:01:30?? | |
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Hi Mr. Zhang,
I'm hesitant to point this out for I don't want to interfere with the reader's interpretation and your translation makes good sense (or even better than the original) even if there are a few places which are a bit off with the original. But here's one: "tresses", I meant a lock of long hair, especially a woman's hair.
Thanks for asking.
Lake |
LAKE先生：
我知道你的“tresses”的含义了。谢谢。这是一种普通文字的诗化意义的使用。非洲人特别是非洲女人的头发很容易让人想到“织物”的。
学习了。
再次感谢。
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