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白水 ?2006-12-13 08:43:47?? Reply with quote


我的执着,透明如风

如冰 Very Happy

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kokho ?2006-12-13 11:03:01?? Reply with quote


静冰 wrote:
I am very joyful,Thanks.Hoped you are also joyful.


可以去欧洲了。。。 学得好快 ;))

回来老板一定加薪 !!!

。。

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亘古清露儿 ?2006-12-13 17:18:31?? Reply with quote


北方狼 wrote:
欢迎朋友。很好的临屏。有个别地方感觉不太明晰,比如:“我的执着,透明如风 ”,这句话意为:我的执著如风般透明,于是就很难理解了。另外“秋夜,排队上路 /目光如炬,想谱曲 ”。目光如炬放在这儿,似乎有所不妥。


很忠恳的,
全部收下了.
问好

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迪拜 ?2006-12-13 21:18:08?? 不错 Reply with quote


总体感觉细腻,温和

一眼看出是"女性"的文字

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亘古清露儿 ?2006-12-14 17:42:06?? Reply with quote


好眼力,
不过下辈子我要做男滴.

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和平岛 ?2006-12-14 17:47:53?? Reply with quote


静冰 wrote:
好眼力,
不过下辈子我要做男滴.


全做男的, 恐怕不现实
Cool

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亘古清露儿 ?2006-12-14 17:58:04?? Reply with quote


那你做女滴,偶做男滴,这样算平衡了吧.嘻嘻~~Smile

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kokho ?2006-12-14 23:14:16?? Reply with quote


静冰 wrote:
那你做女滴,偶做男滴,这样算平衡了吧.嘻嘻~~Smile


哈哈 和平岛 遇上克星  Very Happy Wink Laughing



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和平岛 ?2006-12-14 23:20:08?? Reply with quote


kokho wrote:
静冰 wrote:
那你做女滴,偶做男滴,这样算平衡了吧.嘻嘻~~Smile


哈哈 和平岛 遇上克星  Very Happy Wink Laughing



kokho是一个很有娱乐精神的朋友
这样的朋友, 很难得呀
Very Happy

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