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???the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins

胡礼忠2010-11-15 05:21:45

拜访老师、颂冬祺!

Lake2010-01-16 09:05:12

Thank you.

我家三儿2010-01-07 05:21:39

我叫太阳每天把幸福的阳光洒在你身上,我叫月亮每天给你一个甜美的梦境,祝愿你事事如意! 

Lake2008-11-04 11:04:13

Thanks.

hepingdao2008-11-04 10:52:29

congratulations!
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西方文学 Western Literature
English Poetry
fābiǎoxīntiè   huífùtièzǐ
Form

Form

In a vast field
that revives the spring weeds
a green grasshopper—
wearing his own suit
to conceal himself


2007-05-15 10:41:41
yǐnyòngbìnghuífù
kokho ?2007-05-17 09:19:07?? yǐnyòngbìnghuífù


Good works ... this is a parable!

for a beginner like yourself it is quite an accomplishment...

Cool Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing

..

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yuèlǎnchéngyuánzīliào     kokhoběiměifēngwénjí
Lake ?2007-05-17 10:43:16?? yǐnyòngbìnghuífù


I am glad you think it is a good one.

Yes, for a novice like me any poem born is an accomplishment!

Here is one more:


Green green!
green green green!
green green !
green green green!
green green, the grass!



Laughing

Next month I'll go to Forest Lake to observe Coyotes and Bears and Wolves, Oh My!

Exclamation

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yuèlǎnchéngyuánzīliào     Lakeběiměifēngwénjí
kino ?2007-05-19 21:37:55?? yǐnyòngbìnghuífù


remind me of E E Cummings. Very Happy

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yuèlǎnchéngyuánzīliào     kinoběiměifēngwénjí
Lake ?2007-05-23 10:53:59?? yǐnyòngbìnghuífù


kino xièdào:
remind me of E E Cummings. Very Happy


why? Wink

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yuèlǎnchéngyuánzīliào     Lakeběiměifēngwénjí
kokho ?2007-05-23 23:44:44?? yǐnyòngbìnghuífù


Have a good trip and bring back more poems....

Red red
red red red
red red
red red Lake...

Laughing Laughing Laughing

.

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yuèlǎnchéngyuánzīliào     kokhoběiměifēngwénjí
Lake ?2007-05-24 05:59:57?? yǐnyòngbìnghuífù


kokho xièdào:
Have a good trip and bring back more poems....

Red red
red red red
red red
red red Lake...

Laughing Laughing Laughing

.


洪湖水 浪打浪

Laughing

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yuèlǎnchéngyuánzīliào     Lakeběiměifēngwénjí
kokho ?2007-05-28 11:38:18?? yǐnyòngbìnghuífù


洪湖岸边是江南。。。

Cool Laughing Laughing



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yuèlǎnchéngyuánzīliào     kokhoběiměifēngwénjí
kino ?2007-06-23 06:17:05?? yǐnyòngbìnghuífù


Very Happy just the grasshopper

r-p-o-p-h-e-s-s-a-g-r
who
a)s w(e loo) k
upnowgath
PPEGORHASS
eringint (o-
aThe) :l
eA
!p:
S a
(r
rIvInG .gRrEaPsPhOs)
to
rea (be) rran (com) gi (e) ngly
,grasshopper;

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yuèlǎnchéngyuánzīliào     kinoběiměifēngwénjí
Lake ?2007-06-25 17:08:21?? yǐnyòngbìnghuífù


kino xièdào:
Very Happy just the grasshopper

r-p-o-p-h-e-s-s-a-g-r
who
a)s w(e loo) k
upnowgath
PPEGORHASS
eringint (o-
aThe) :l
eA
!p:
S a
(r
rIvInG .gRrEaPsPhOs)
to
rea (be) rran (com) gi (e) ngly
,grasshopper;


Thanks, here is the uncrambled.
e.e. cummings is really ginmesoth.

grasshopper
who
as we look
up now gathering
GRASSHOPPER
into-
a ‘T’ he leaps!:
arriving grasshopper
to rearrangingly
become
grasshopper

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yuèlǎnchéngyuánzīliào     Lakeběiměifēngwénjí
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