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古韵新音
西方文学 Western Literature
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Yesterday's Melody

Yesterday's Melody

My soul is haunted
by yesterday's melody
An autumn leaf sheds its green outfit
and mounts up to a mountain of splendor

My soul is haunted
by yesterday‘s melody
A freshly-brewed coffee
camouflaged at the far corner
savors the bittersweet aroma

My soul is haunted
by yesterday's melody
A chirping bird flashes by and disappears
to the blue blue sky
......

When my soul is haunted
by yesterday's melody
I am the leaf,the coffee,and the bird ......

2013-03-26 13:27:29
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William Zhou周道模 ?2013-03-28 07:32:31?? yǐnyòngbìnghuífù


Good poem! enjoying it.
Lake ?2013-03-29 00:28:06?? yǐnyòngbìnghuífù


Flows well. Does the poem mean that all the best time is gone? Then set your eyes in the future.

I hear in modern poems "soul" is rarely used, unless used creatively. Smile

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yuèlǎnchéngyuánzīliào     Lakeběiměifēngwénjí
SLIU ?2013-03-29 19:08:03?? yǐnyòngbìnghuífù


William Zhou周道模 xièdào:
Good poem! enjoying it.


Thanks William..

Have a nice weekend.

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yuèlǎnchéngyuánzīliào     SLIUběiměifēngwénjí
SLIU ?2013-03-29 19:10:08?? yǐnyòngbìnghuífù


Lake xièdào:
Flows well. Does the poem mean that all the best time is gone? Then set your eyes in the future.
...


Thanks Lake!

A poem, I guess, is like a piece of clay. One (the writer or reader) can shape it the way he/she likes.

As for the use of "soul", it's just a personal preference. But i am glad you pointed it out. I do appreciate your comments.

Have a nice weekend.

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yuèlǎnchéngyuánzīliào     SLIUběiměifēngwénjí
白水 ?2013-03-30 10:10:31?? yǐnyòngbìnghuífù


When my soul is haunted
by yesterday's melody
I am the leaf,the coffee,and the bird ......

it is beautiful

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yuèlǎnchéngyuánzīliào     白水běiměifēngwénjí
SLIU ?2013-03-31 10:05:08?? yǐnyòngbìnghuífù


白水 Moonlight xièdào:
When my soul is haunted
...


Thanks Moonlight!

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yuèlǎnchéngyuánzīliào     SLIUběiměifēngwénjí
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