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古韵新音
西方文学 Western Literature
fābiǎoxīntiè   huífùtièzǐ
Leaves and Buds

Leaves and buds 111207 130102

Shivering
and flapping wildly
in the piercing wind
the brown leaves
ragged and torn
hold fast
onto the half-stripped branches
to nurture
with the very last breath
the birth of the tiny buds --
so delicate
yet composed
whose fragrance
consoles
even the worst frostbitten souls

2013-01-01 10:03:34
yǐnyòngbìnghuífù
summer ?2013-01-04 12:06:02?? yǐnyòngbìnghuífù


laoshi, 我来学习

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yuèlǎnchéngyuánzīliào     summerběiměifēngwénjí
hepingdao ?2013-02-28 12:03:36?? yǐnyòngbìnghuífù


pretty poem

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yuèlǎnchéngyuánzīliào     hepingdaoběiměifēngwénjí
Lake ?2013-03-02 00:34:52?? yǐnyòngbìnghuífù


delicate.

yǐnyòng:
hold fast on
to the half-stripped branches


would like to see "on to" on the same line.

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yuèlǎnchéngyuánzīliào     Lakeběiměifēngwénjí
SLIU ?2013-03-02 08:36:40?? yǐnyòngbìnghuífù


Thank you guys.
Lake, I changed it. Thanks!

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yuèlǎnchéngyuánzīliào     SLIUběiměifēngwénjí
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