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张南城2009-08-18 04:26:57

问候先生。

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五绝 船帆(汉译英)

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破浪御风船,栖身浅水湾。
无缘临大海,空挂一桅帆。

An Empty Sail

A ship can drive winds,
and travel thousands of miles far away,
But she is blocked in a shallow bay.
Without opportunity on the sea,
An empty sail has no word to say.

新改:

A ship can drive winds,
and travel thousands of miles away,
But she is blocked in a shallow bay.
Without opportunity on the sea,
An empty sail has no word to say.

2011-06-07 13:43:49
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William Zhou周道模 ?2011-06-13 18:09:11?? yǐnyòngbìnghuífù


far 是否可以不要?
qinghongh ?2011-06-13 18:29:50?? yǐnyòngbìnghuífù


William Zhou周道模 xièdào:
far 是否可以不要?


好建议,谢谢!

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