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 Spring Coming Soon
Spring Coming Soon
Buds are tantalized in the cold weather,
Right now smiling in the garden window;
I‘m searching the tip of CN Tower,
Sight goes through the bank with golden willow.
Groundhogs looking around message better,
The host of land is talking to follow;
Lilies are blooming show more to colour,
Choosing white or pink, orange or yellow.
Green grass gradually takes out ice cover,
Mulberry at the place with long shadow;
People are looking for getting more stronger,
Clouds in sky who know how I can borrow.
Spread wheat seeds in the field of Toronto,
My eyes are opening to look dough phyllo.
May 15，2010，Hormish Garden of Toronto 6:30 to 7:30am
Revised，July 31，2010
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| 白水 ?2010-12-27 09:08:38?? |  |
很棒的意境。小建议，或许简洁语法和修辞会更好些。节日好
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| 连南河 ?2011-02-06 06:34:28?? | |
Thanks.
Happy Chines New Year!
一种尝试
诗之韵采用abab abab abab bb
模拟唐之韵的“绝”或“律”
五律 临屏偶书
－－白水为黄洋界老师回多伦多接风后续
清风堤岸鹿，
白水玉冰壶。
墨下三分虎，
毫雕五秒鱼。
鸥轻云信步，
鹤重雨留书。
松鼠耀枫树，
飞鹅俊马湖。
Dec. 25，2010，Hormish Garden of Toronto（南河书院）8:00 -11:00 am
Toronto Greetings（十四行）
To Pro. Xu
一晃五年多的时光挥手流去，
诗意一般多伦多的田园山光；
一条心中的故乡河随风带雨，
枫叶飘飘的国土美丽而芬芳。
乌龙江的水永远流趟的情愫，
你的问候带来了无限的思量；
金山湖的粼粼碧波清清如许，
走过的岁月睡梦中晶莹透亮。
真诚的字里行间游动的旋律，
犹如那夜空白兰花淡淡馨香；
春晖桥头那柳丝飞落的花絮，
牵动安大略湖畔宽松的臂膀。
噢！自由的人儿自由的遐想，
噢！崇尚民主与和平的天堂。
Feb. 14, 2010 Hormish Garden of Toronto（南河书院）7:30-8:20 pm
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