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西方文学 Western Literature
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【原创汉英双语诗】彩虹是谁(Who is the rainbow)

彩虹是谁

那天是个好天气
在一次飞行里
阳光照射进来
彩虹明艳多彩
艳阳高照
而雪是那样的洁白
彩虹是谁
她只是微笑



Who is the rainbow

The day is fine
During the flight
The sunlight is inside
The rainbow is bright
The sun is shining
The snow is white
Who is the rainbow
She just smiles

2010-10-07 05:02:31
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William Zhou周道模 ?2010-10-20 20:49:37?? yǐnyòngbìnghuífù


inside 前是否应加动词啊?
jwqmxxy ?2010-12-07 19:11:42?? yǐnyòngbìnghuífù


谢谢道模先生的提醒

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