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张南城2009-08-03 23:39:31

向先生问声夏日好。

惠远飞2009-02-10 15:45:50

非马前辈:
  晚生有一诗集,即将出版。希望能有机会获得你的指正并想恳请你能不吝为我作序!
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      晚辈:惠远飞

        2009.02.11

非馬專欄 William Marr's Column
西方文学 Western Literature
fābiǎoxīntiè   huífùtièzǐ
A BELATED DIRGE

A BELATED DIRGE
-- for the students perished in recent earthquakes

we should have sung the dirge for you
when they put down the shaky foundation
propped up shoddy beams
and whitewashed cruddy walls

Yet we all kept silence
waited for the earthquake to strike
burying you alive
now all we can do is wail
and sing a belated dirge

2010-04-25 11:24:46
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Lake ?2010-04-26 07:42:34?? yǐnyòngbìnghuífù


As always, thought provoking read.

Lake

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yuèlǎnchéngyuánzīliào     Lakeběiměifēngwénjí
戴玨 ?2010-04-27 07:15:05?? yǐnyòngbìnghuífù


感覺去掉cowardly效果會更好。

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yuèlǎnchéngyuánzīliào     戴玨běiměifēngwénjí
非马 ?2010-04-27 07:19:22?? yǐnyòngbìnghuífù


戴玨 xièdào:
感覺去掉cowardly效果會更好。

I think you are right. Using "cowardly" might be too telling. Thanks!

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yuèlǎnchéngyuánzīliào     非马běiměifēngwénjí
戴玨 ?2010-04-27 07:24:21?? yǐnyòngbìnghuífù


其實不僅是怯懦,也可以是冷漠、麻木,如此種種。

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yuèlǎnchéngyuánzīliào     戴玨běiměifēngwénjí
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