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张南城2009-08-03 23:39:31

向先生问声夏日好。

惠远飞2009-02-10 15:45:50

非马前辈:
  晚生有一诗集,即将出版。希望能有机会获得你的指正并想恳请你能不吝为我作序!
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      晚辈:惠远飞

        2009.02.11

非馬專欄 William Marr's Column
西方文学 Western Literature
fābiǎoxīntiè   huífùtièzǐ
SEA O SEA

SEA O SEA
-- slaughtering pilot whales in the Faroe Islands, Denmark

calm after carnage
the bloody sea
finally ceases boiling

soon the night curtain will fall
to conceal the savage scene
letting the glaring red fade
into the deep dark corner
of unhumankind's memory


*The following Website contains related photos:
http://teadream.wordpress.com/2008/12/05/demark/

2009-12-07 10:39:08
yǐnyòngbìnghuífù
Lake ?2009-12-07 23:08:29?? yǐnyòngbìnghuífù


Shocking, very powerful imagery. I wouldn't want to be at the scene. I guess it must be a heated issue. Concise and compact as always.

Enjoyed.

Lake

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William Zhou周道模 ?2010-02-08 20:14:43?? yǐnyòngbìnghuífù


尽管我们能读懂,我还是想介绍给不懂英语的更多的读者。试译如下,请非马老师审校。

大海啊大海

——丹麦法罗岛上的屠杀领航鲸事件

非马 诗 周道模 译


屠戮之后的平静
血染的海啊
最终停止了沸腾

不久夜幕会降下
遮掩这残酷的场景
使这灼目的血红
淡入非人类记忆的
幽深的角落
非马 ?2010-02-08 21:23:22?? yǐnyòngbìnghuífù


不久夜的幕帘就会降下--不久夜幕将会降下
是否简洁些?

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yuèlǎnchéngyuánzīliào     非马běiměifēngwénjí
William Zhou周道模 ?2010-02-08 23:41:25?? yǐnyòngbìnghuífù


非马 xièdào:
不久夜的幕帘就会降下--不久夜幕将会降下
是否简洁些?


我原来想“夜幕”和“夜暮”有点混淆。好,改过来。谢非马老师!
冷巉 ?2010-02-17 19:46:24?? yǐnyòngbìnghuífù


Lake xièdào:
Shocking, very powerful imagery. I wouldn't want to be at the scene. I guess it must be a heated issue. Concise and compact as always.
...


同感。问好。

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yuèlǎnchéngyuánzīliào     冷巉běiměifēngwénjí
冷巉 ?2010-02-17 19:47:44?? yǐnyòngbìnghuífù


问好非马老师,感谢周道模先生的译作,让我读懂了这篇诗作。

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yuèlǎnchéngyuánzīliào     冷巉běiměifēngwénjí
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