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钓月

???中国江苏

?????74?

?????2008-04-12

???教师

???写作翻译旅游

?????fāsòngsīrénliúyán

?????fāsòngdiànzǐyóujiàn

cházhǎo钓月fābiǎodesuǒyòutièzǐ

???欲钓那只太阳,却钓了一轮月亮

http://www.hongxiu.com/my.asp?id=1310875
http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanqirong

现代诗歌
古韵新音
西方文学 Western Literature
fābiǎoxīntiè   huífùtièzǐ
Farewell to the Moon(原创双语)

Cold heels
Tap out a metallic rhythm.
Quiet streets
Empty the confused heart.
Here's the parting place.
I look at you, you at the moon.


别 月

冷冷的鞋跟
敲出金属音响
静谧的街道
空了攘乱心房
到了分手地方
我望你,你望月亮

2008-05-12 05:40:40
yǐnyòngbìnghuífù
Lake ?2008-05-13 21:54:30?? yǐnyòngbìnghuífù


不错。'metalic' or 'metallic'?

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yuèlǎnchéngyuánzīliào     Lakeběiměifēngwénjí
钓月 ?2008-05-15 01:36:01?? yǐnyòngbìnghuífù


谢谢你的指点!

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yuèlǎnchéngyuánzīliào     钓月běiměifēngwénjí
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