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???(在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美)

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caged in tracks

of the film, she fled

into the screen

many a time

I watched her

wandering the fields

2013-05-09 02:16:06
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SLIU ?2013-05-09 22:49:05?? 引用並回復


out of a cage
into a trap
the end of the cycle begins the next world

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楓人苑 ?2013-05-09 23:12:34?? 引用並回復


the wind is locked in the space
it does not go anywhere eventually
except changes our focus

like the word picture 迴

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SLIU ?2013-05-09 23:40:51?? 引用並回復


looks like a cage, a screen and a field
someone is fleeing or wandering...

perfect description of the picture

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summer ?2013-05-15 10:58:42?? 引用並回復


a snail carrying its house or cage

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博弈 ?2013-05-15 22:02:01?? 引用並回復


summer 寫到:
a snail carrying its house or cage


That's a very good interpretation.

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楓人苑 ?2013-05-16 00:40:39?? 引用並回復


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mBE3WYZ_tJo

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