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???the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins

胡礼忠2010-11-15 05:21:45

拜访老师、颂冬祺!

Lake2010-01-16 09:05:12

Thank you.

我家三儿2010-01-07 05:21:39

我叫太阳每天把幸福的阳光洒在你身上,我叫月亮每天给你一个甜美的梦境,祝愿你事事如意! 

Lake2008-11-04 11:04:13

Thanks.

hepingdao2008-11-04 10:52:29

congratulations!
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At Age 76

At Age 76

Beijing Tokyo Minneapolis /St Paul.

She tunnels through currents and clouds,
transported to this imagined land with
all she can utter - hello, yes, no, I’m sorry...

We both know what this trip means,
we do know, but we don’t say it.

We spend our best time at Cub Foods;
she holds me back at a pedestrian crossing
as the driver waves your right-of-way.

She smiles to kids in shopping carts,
smiles when a puppy barks around,
smiles at the neighbor’s friendly greetings

and nervously replies:
sorry, wǒ bù dǒng yīng yǔ .
(I don’t know English)

You’ve seen how someone deftly moves
the beads on an abacus up and down.
Such is the way her mind works at numbers,

converting from $ to ¥ or vice versa
so easily. I give her more maths to do and
wonder if I will be able to do the same.

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SLIU ?2013-04-01 20:33:29?? 引用並回復


描写很真实,生动。 欣赏。。

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非马 ?2013-04-03 10:44:39?? 引用並回復


A lovely poem, indeed.

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白水 ?2013-04-03 22:29:23?? 引用並回復


Very Happy How lovely grandma

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Lake ?2013-04-05 02:28:44?? 引用並回復


Thank you Sliu, Mr Fei Ma and Moonlight for the lovely comments.

Lake

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博弈 ?2013-06-25 23:18:44?? 引用並回復


good.

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Lake ?2013-06-27 03:50:15?? 引用並回復


Thanks Mark. You know what, this "good" one received -0.9 from Poetry Assessor Very Happy

Another one of mine which I don't think highly of, not mentioning its name, received 7.8 Surprised

http://www.poetryassessor.com/poetry/

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博弈 ?2013-06-27 04:30:08?? 引用並回復


Lake 寫到:
Thanks Mark. You know what, this "good" one received -0.9 from Poetry Assessor Very Happy
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I don't give 'good' casually, it s GOOD, it means beyond words, but not yet away from normal poetics.

I like it.

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