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胡济卫2011-09-27 09:18:29

能否给我寄一本《北美枫》地址：河南省驻马店市驿城区文化和旅游局胡济卫邮编：463000

胡礼忠2010-11-15 05:16:05

拜访老师、颂冬祺！

溪月梦2010-02-21 05:25:15

刚到这里，有点眼花缭乱，还请指导。

张南城2009-08-03 00:12:17

看望先生，问好。我是个新手，望多关照。

hepingdao2009-01-25 19:53:34

感谢山城子老师,先生高风亮节,
情怀可嘉,风骨可佩,期待先生大作早日成书

山城子2009-01-24 01:20:46

山城子给岛主拜年——祝你春节愉快安康幸福吉祥！
同享一首七绝：
牛来鼠去岁将除，年味浓浓瑞雪铺。
做客故乡竟半年，亲情蜜意可成书。
2009-1-24晚上于故乡辽西

白衣年代2008-11-08 20:27:21

请赐寄《北美枫》：723500陕西省西乡县第一中学高三复课（23）班杨康我的邮箱：YK20086631@163.com

白衣年代2008-11-08 20:26:40

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白衣年代2008-11-08 20:26:20

请赐寄《北美枫》：723500陕西省西乡县第一中学高三复课（23）班杨康

sunyunjuan20082007-11-23 05:35:47

真对不起啊，来到新家什么也不懂，换板面时不小心把您的留言无意中删除了，特向您道歉来了 Crying or Very sad

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现代诗歌

LB目睹过两次城管‘执法’

一个城管把卖小吃的饭碗高高举起
另一城管大声呵斥
夹杂着
唾沫星
碎瓷片,太阳的血滴,扎眼的反光
它们的中间
是小贩
流浪狗,人渣,扎进南京城墙的肉钉子

而我只是围观墙外的一位过路人
恰好看到这枚钉子
在原地
哆嗦着,慢慢的缩小,消失

直到今天,LB,我都不敢肯定六朝古都那厚厚的油脂皮层下
一根倒刺
隐隐疼痛,热血上涌,像把刀明晃晃的...拔不出来

2012-05-03 02:37:25

hepingdao ?2012-05-03 04:02:06??

What more interesting is: what is more important in poetry
forms or content.
送交者: steven 于 2012-05-03, 14:06:00

this is a very good question, this poem is a perfect example for this topic
所有跟贴·加跟贴·新语丝读书论坛

送交者: 和平岛于 2012-05-03, 14:21:23:

回答: What more interesting is: what is more important in poetry 由 steven 于 2012-05-03, 14:06:00:

a content without a correct form is not a poem.
The material is provided by LB. I was shocked by what he saw. I decided to work on this piece of content. The process I took is based on my understanding of poetry:
form, using rhythm and imagery.

First step: figure out the things, nouns, persons that the poem needs to present, analyze the relationships among themselves;
second step: distort them, transform them into imagery of a poem. This will involve lots of imagination, from solid things to things in your imagination, things not real, but at the same time, are more than real;
finally, put them together, in a contrasted and concentrated way.

The end of this process is the creation of a poem, like it or not

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