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???the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins

胡礼忠2010-11-15 05:21:45

拜访老师、颂冬祺!

Lake2010-01-16 09:05:12

Thank you.

我家三儿2010-01-07 05:21:39

我叫太阳每天把幸福的阳光洒在你身上,我叫月亮每天给你一个甜美的梦境,祝愿你事事如意! 

Lake2008-11-04 11:04:13

Thanks.

hepingdao2008-11-04 10:52:29

congratulations!
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西方文学 Western Literature
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Spring

Spring

In the blue distance
 a flock of Canadian geese
soaring with the clouds
 arrows home.

It is a determined journey.
 All day
I hear them honking joy
 to this chilly spring.

Their black heads and long necks
 parallel to the treetop lines
like spears hurled
 in the air, advancing

to their destination.
 I can feel their wings
fanning above, propellers
 pushing through the currents.

Some early birds
 slide into
a pool of shallow water
 still laced with a frozen sheet.

The question is
 how to break the ice -
I think of them
 ducking under

for treasure,
 their full breasts
pressing against
 the edge of thin crust,

each cracking -
 an opening of a petal,
a note of music,
 a breakthrough.

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2012-04-04 05:42:36
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hepingdao ?2012-04-11 02:24:25?? 引用並回復


最后一节很好

an opening of blossom

bud?

Very Happy

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Lake ?2012-04-11 03:49:54?? 引用並回復


Thanks hepingdao.

A revision of the last stanza. Smile

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hepingdao ?2012-04-11 04:14:30?? 引用並回復


sounds great to me
Very Happy

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