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 MRI gate
MRI gate
the slab is long and rectangular
eh slowly being
pushed into the vertical circle
they were on it, in the center--
cell tight, noises around the wall
a straw in the cup deep like well
sucking and circulating
pressure's fulfilling
shades washing, edges waving
outside over the window
scanning, inch by inch
slice by slice, is counting events
the intertwined the distorted
all being examined
--the slab is coming out
they look back
like eh
a bottleneck is being passed
now unlocked
everyone is
cracking the code
of the-ed climax
2011-08-18 07:52:21 |
| Lake ?2011-08-18 08:21:47?? |  |
What does the abbreviation of MRI stand for? Don't tell me it is a scientific and technical term, or I'll quit on it. 
I think it is well written - the sound, the rhythm, the language. I'm not sure of the use of 'eh', it sounds too everyday-ish compared with the diction of the rest of the poem. But you definitely have a reason of using it. And I don't know who 'they' are.
Thanks for the read.
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| 博弈 ?2011-08-18 19:45:26?? | |
MRI: Magnetic Resonance Imaging
Magnetic resonance imaging (MRI) is a test that uses a magnetic field and pulses of radio wave energy to make pictures of organs and structures inside the body.
"磁共振成像"
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| 博弈 ?2011-08-18 20:00:46?? | |
有人用來診病, 有人在裡頭生小孩(過程拍照),
有科學家用它研究男女性交時性器官的變化.
人們對隱私的好奇, 現在總稱什麼什麼門.
或可說借這機器來作隱射吧. "豔照門"是也.
人們總愛挖掘的 
slab 有哲學意義的, 要看上面躺著的是什麼, 文字, 圖象, 人, 現象.
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