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连南河2011-01-01 07:25:08

问候冷雨,新年快乐!

冷雨2010-12-25 03:19:51

问候连南河老师
圣诞节快乐!

古韵新音
西方文学 Western Literature
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Spring Coming Soon

Spring Coming Soon

Buds are tantalized in the cold weather,
Right now smiling in the garden window;
I‘m searching the tip of CN Tower,
Sight goes through the bank with golden willow.

Groundhogs looking around message better,
The host of land is talking to follow;
Lilies are blooming show more to colour,
Choosing white or pink, orange or yellow.

Green grass gradually takes out ice cover,
Mulberry at the place with long shadow;
People are looking for getting more stronger,
Clouds in sky who know how I can borrow.

Spread wheat seeds in the field of Toronto,
My eyes are opening to look dough phyllo.

May 15,2010,Hormish Garden of Toronto 6:30 to 7:30am
Revised,July 31,2010

2010-12-24 09:48:17
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白水 ?2010-12-27 09:08:38?? 引用並回復


很棒的意境。小建议,或许简洁语法和修辞会更好些。节日好

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连南河 ?2011-02-06 06:34:28?? 引用並回復


Thanks.

Happy Chines New Year!

一种尝试
诗之韵采用abab abab abab bb
模拟唐之韵的“绝”或“律”

五律 临屏偶书
--白水为黄洋界老师回多伦多接风后续

清风堤岸鹿,
白水玉冰壶。
墨下三分虎,
毫雕五秒鱼。
鸥轻云信步,
鹤重雨留书。
松鼠耀枫树,
飞鹅俊马湖。

Dec. 25,2010,Hormish Garden of Toronto(南河书院)8:00 -11:00 am

Toronto Greetings(十四行)

To Pro. Xu


一晃五年多的时光挥手流去,
诗意一般多伦多的田园山光;
一条心中的故乡河随风带雨,
枫叶飘飘的国土美丽而芬芳。

乌龙江的水永远流趟的情愫,
你的问候带来了无限的思量;
金山湖的粼粼碧波清清如许,
走过的岁月睡梦中晶莹透亮。

真诚的字里行间游动的旋律,
犹如那夜空白兰花淡淡馨香;
春晖桥头那柳丝飞落的花絮,
牵动安大略湖畔宽松的臂膀。

噢!自由的人儿自由的遐想,
噢!崇尚民主与和平的天堂。

Feb. 14, 2010 Hormish Garden of Toronto(南河书院)7:30-8:20 pm

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