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???the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins

胡礼忠2010-11-15 05:21:45

拜访老师、颂冬祺!

Lake2010-01-16 09:05:12

Thank you.

我家三儿2010-01-07 05:21:39

我叫太阳每天把幸福的阳光洒在你身上,我叫月亮每天给你一个甜美的梦境,祝愿你事事如意! 

Lake2008-11-04 11:04:13

Thanks.

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Peak Time

the entrance
of the

parking lot
where

everything halts
except

in the glare of
headlights

two geese waddle
around

2010-05-29 17:51:43
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博弈 ?2010-05-30 18:34:48?? 引用並回復


很有趣味!

I think it may be better if it is
"at the entrance"

(it would be: everything halts at the entrance....)

also, "peak hour" is more commonly used.
peak time is fine too.


Smile

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Lake ?2010-05-31 09:48:06?? 引用並回復


Thanks for the feedback from the antic, antique typewriter.

I see what you mean.

Thanks much,博弈!

Lake

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