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 a kind of homesick
funny I hear blacks
coming my way and feel warm
crossing tokyo streets
2010-04-17 16:16:06 |
| Lake ?2010-04-17 17:14:06?? |  |
Are you in Japan now? Then it is quite apt to write a haiku. True, anything from the place where you once lived will arouse a warm feeling when it is seen in a foreign land.
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| 博弈 ?2010-04-22 19:33:35?? | |
yes, posted it when in japan.
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| 博弈 ?2010-04-26 18:42:30?? | |
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| True, anything from the place where you once lived will arouse a warm feeling when it is seen in a foreign land. |
on 2nd thought, America is unique because of its blacks,
not because of whites. this uniqueness is getting more
and more obvious in American History as time moves
along. I don't feel homesick when hearing whites speaking
English, but did so when it's blacks. Interesting?
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| 非马 ?2010-04-26 20:02:12?? | |
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| True, anything from the place where you once lived will arouse a warm feeling when it is seen in a foreign land. |
on 2nd thought, America is unique because of its blacks,
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I was wondering why you used "hear" instead of "see". Now I know why.
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| 博弈 ?2010-04-27 23:12:19?? | |
also, to me hearing meant (carry such effect) a past memory approaching,
seeing or sighting meant a vision present or into the future
I prefer hear here even both arrived at about the same time
while I was waiting and crossing streets.
thanks for all comments. 
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