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???the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins

胡礼忠2010-11-15 05:21:45

拜访老师、颂冬祺!

Lake2010-01-16 09:05:12

Thank you.

我家三儿2010-01-07 05:21:39

我叫太阳每天把幸福的阳光洒在你身上,我叫月亮每天给你一个甜美的梦境,祝愿你事事如意! 

Lake2008-11-04 11:04:13

Thanks.

hepingdao2008-11-04 10:52:29

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The Grave Covered by Snow

The Grave Covered by Snow

A squirrel in the pine tree,
snow-flattened shrubs
prostrating themselves to the ground,
rusty leaves lay lifeless.
The cemetery is very quiet,
tombstones, low and high, crude and grand
stand still in rows, each bearing its own secret.
Here, only the north wind whistles around,
only the squirrel, leaping from tree to tree
brushes a few pine needles down,
startles a few crow's caws, breaking the silence .
Then he appears,
unshaven for as long as he's gone.
He is silent like the grave,
and light as the squirrel,
a faint, cunning smile on his mouth.
Oh, does he see the Christmas-wreath?
Does he know whose foot prints they are in front of the tomb?
I extend my hand to touch
a flake of snow,
a flake of his skin.

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William Zhou周道模 ?2010-03-25 01:55:59?? 引用並回復


I can understand this poem. Because I wrote a long Chinese poem about semetery and also been to

Babaoshan Semetery in Beijing.

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Lake ?2010-04-12 12:42:19?? 引用並回復


Good for you that you can relate to it.

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戴玨 ?2010-04-15 14:55:28?? 引用並回復


Interesting poem! The last 3 lines may be omitted.

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Lake ?2010-04-17 05:41:29?? 引用並回復


Thanks 戴玨. Interesting reply, too.
The last three lines - right now I'm kind of reluctant to remove. Confused But I'll think it over.

All the best,

Lake

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nightingale2 ?2010-04-20 23:31:59?? 引用並回復


there's a big chill down my backbone, sad. but i'm still looking forword going to the heaven, the heaven,oh, the heaven, where all happyness are, how wonderful is that? very! Razz

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