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 【汉英微型诗】花 鸟
花 鸟
一树李花吊一笼鸟声……
一只画眉在跳啄啼问：
花朵妹妹，你们为啥不飞？
Flowers and a Bird
A plum tree in blossom hanging a cage of bird crying
A thrush is hopping and pecking while asking
Flowers, my sisters, why don’t you fly
2010-3-9 晨 2：40
2010-03-11 21:27:32 |
| Lake ?2010-03-12 11:51:25?? |  |
Lovely.
Title - "Flowers and Bird", could it be "Flowers and Birds" or "Flowers and a Bird"?
Your little poem prompted me to have a rewrite, which may not be as accurate as yours. Hope you don't mind.
A tree of plum blossoms, a cage of bird cries
Hopping and pecking, a thrush chirps –
My sister flowers, why don’t you fly?
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| William Zhou周道模 ?2010-03-12 18:27:01?? | |
thank Lake for your suggestion and glad to see your good translation!
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