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????? ?????nightingale2的博客 查找nightingale2發錶的所有帖子 fuller6792010-01-01 00:41:472010年元旦来临，祝各位朋友幸福、健康、创新向上！
仅将江西庐山东林寺大安主持的弟子道元法师的短信转发大家分享：
[至远者非天涯而在人心，
至久者非天地而在真情，
之善者非雄才而在胸怀，
至亲者非血缘而在关爱。
愿远者近，
久者恒，
善者圣，
亲者共。
今天又是弥陀圣诞，
正在冬季佛七中，
就让我送去千亿圣号的祝福吧!
东林寺 道元] fuller6792009-12-29 20:57:33跌跤再爬起来
冰天雪地
是大自然恩赐给
我们的特别景观
勇敢参与
冰城之旅
饱尝北国冬泳的浪漫
冰雪征途上
跌跤在所难免
总结经验教研
跌倒再爬起来
跌跤是财富
跌跤价值万贯
信任自力必胜
终将赢得
冰上花样滑冰之冠
遥祝2010年元旦快快乐乐! fuller6792009-12-26 06:03:38[唯有一朵玫瑰花蕾痛苦地呐喊 ]
--让人对那“一朵玫瑰花蕾”赞赏
黑暗总会有尽头，黎明一定会来临的，一个事物总有两个方面，消极会向积极的方面转变的，当然玫瑰花蕾起了推动的作用。你能给人以动力，人们会感激你啊！要自信，求医不如求己，伤什麽都不能伤心。你说对吗? fuller6792009-12-23 19:13:05我很感谢您的诚挚回复。
您内心的痛楚，我已感觉到，望您想得开些，不要长期的折磨自己，你的亲人需要您的爱，你的理想需要你去实现，世上的路总是曲折的，人生就是与困惑征战，春夏秋冬各有美景啊！
虎年将来临，顺祝你心想事成，开心每一天。 fuller6792009-11-24 07:39:24"我 躺在蓝海中歌唱
点一支淡淡的烛光
温柔却躲进深深的云心
双眸莹莹 溢淌忧情 "
"我 躺在蓝海中歌唱
点一支淡淡的烛光
温柔却躲进深深的云心
双眸莹莹 溢淌忧情 "
”我随着你的思路，走进你的内心世界，理解你的环境不一般。但你是坚强的，是乐观主义者，人生的路是不平坦的，生活就是不停的奋发图强啊“ fuller6792009-11-04 22:21:44致nightingale2
秋季
是收获的季节,
秋天
是感恩的日夜;
秋播
是策划新的时机;
秋高气爽,
是放歌期望的时光.
莫悲伤,
莫自负,
莫徬徨,
强健的
奔向目标.
为理想高歌,
要靠
自爱
自强!
fuller679 hepingdao2009-10-22 10:21:06welcome, nightingale2,
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Blue Moon Nights, Songs are Andantes/蓝月亮之夜,歌若行板
蓝月亮之夜，歌若行板
--by nightinngale2
每当蓝色涂满月亮
诗歌 汹涌成子夜的海洋
星光轻轻 睡鸟低吟
树叶微颤 虫歌声频
我 躺在蓝海中歌唱
点一支淡淡的烛光
温柔却躲进深深的云心
双眸莹莹 溢淌忧情
不意作悲剧的奴役
即便 山林奏发深沉的哀曲
潘神将笛乐狂鸣
宁芙们的舞步乱了阵营
无欲轻去云端处俯望
野兽与蛇蝎都已悄行暗闯
午夜 莫属于孤狼嗷嚎的独占
高歌的人不屑做低等的表演
掘墓者不流噬尸者的哀泪
愉悦 将在躯壳们崩溃时红旌飘飞
当恐惧用镇威控制了四邻
却 无法剥夺我心自由的声音
我歌若行板 漫流成河
缪斯将我的长短句一并收割
Blue Moon Nights, Songs are Andantes
--by Nightingale
As the blue paints the moon,
Lyrics surge high in mid-night gloom.
Starlight floating whilst birds murmuring.
Leaves shivering whilst insects singing.
A few music notes I uttering
with a little candlelight shinning.
Tender feelings are hiden in thick clouds.
Tears’ glistening overflows my sadness for some thoughts.
A slave of tragedy isn’t my intent.
Though the forest holds a sad music event.
Pan plays the pipe with meaningless tunes madly
And nymphs dancing in cheos movement sadly.
None is my plan to look down from the high cloud.
Beasts and snakes creeping with sound very loud.
No mid-night belongs to one wolf’s howl.
Neither does a proud man plays his shows with flaw.
Gravediggers shed no sad tears of ghouls.
The red flag in happiness hands when corpses collapse.
Could horror with power terrorizes my neighbours,
but this heart of mine always sings for freedom for sure.
My songs are andantes flowing like rivers.
My lyrics harvested by Muses,
long or short wins all concerns.
（* 潘/PAN：希腊神话的山林之神，有羊角、羊腿和人身，爱吹笛子，故南美洲的的排箫叫做PAN FLUTE;
宁芙/NYMPH：是希腊神话里的女神仙、精灵，长着翅膀，有十来种，喜欢与潘唱歌跳舞，有-木精灵Dryad、水精灵Naiad、山精Oread、海精、Nereid等等 )
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| Lake ?2009-10-22 10:11:05?? | |
Hi nightingale,
A pleasing post, reads like your pen name, a song.
Just a few thoughts:
I feel your rhyme made a little damage here and there. For example:
"Thick clouds hide the tender feeling the lot."
I didn't quite understand 'the lot'.
"Pan plays the pipe madly
And nymphs dance so badly. "
I think you can find better words to replace "madly" and "badly", these two words are a bit too easy for the sake of rhyme?
Thanks for the reference.
Keep them coming.
Lake
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| nightingale2 ?2009-10-23 01:44:07?? | |
thank you very much,my dear. i'll walk and sleep on this problem  
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| nightingale2 ?2009-11-20 03:43:16?? | |
i just changed it, how it looks now?
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