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Sonnet XII (一晃八年)

harsh work has turned my legs to a balloon
so that i drag my feet to find repose
as my sunken eyes see the shiny moon
my heart is pierced by gloom and pain hence grows
when you and i held hands in bright moon ray
you reassured me of your decision
i thus withdrew my hand and walked away
but memories had blurred all my vision
whenever i now think of Concord's spring
your eyes appear in mine and mine then weep:
i wish to fly to you on the moon's wing
to hear you breathe when you are sound asleep
a man's sweetheart is carved in his fond heart
his sweetheart's heart may well be far apart

2009-03-13 11:05:44
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hepingdao ?2009-03-13 12:09:43?? 引用並回復


gentle and romantic

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kino ?2009-03-13 15:28:00?? 引用並回復


a man's sweetheart is carved in his fond heart
his sweetheart's heart may well be far apart

Very Happy
很工整。欣赏。

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justjust ?2009-03-14 08:18:41?? sigh 引用並回復


hepingdao 寫到:
gentle and romantic


two years of talking, laughing and sporting on walden pond reminds me of many fond memories.

thank you for reading.

kino 寫到:
a man's sweetheart is carved in his fond heart
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oh, a woman's heart. as you know, a couplet is necessary in a shakespearen sonnet. but of course, i am no comparison to shakespeare:)
thank you.

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Lake ?2009-03-14 18:21:03?? 引用並回復


just, welcome! nice sonnet. 一晃八年, move on and upwards. Smile

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justjust ?2009-03-14 22:23:36?? 引用並回復


Lake 寫到:
just, welcome! nice sonnet. 一晃八年, move on and upwards. Smile

Thank you. i will continue my journey of searching for my love.

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