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???the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins

胡礼忠2010-11-15 05:21:45

拜访老师、颂冬祺!

Lake2010-01-16 09:05:12

Thank you.

我家三儿2010-01-07 05:21:39

我叫太阳每天把幸福的阳光洒在你身上,我叫月亮每天给你一个甜美的梦境,祝愿你事事如意! 

Lake2008-11-04 11:04:13

Thanks.

hepingdao2008-11-04 10:52:29

congratulations!
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Sleep well my child

Sleep well my child
- A lament for a lost child in the earthquake

No, you were not like this before – lying there, breathless.
Never! Your shirt is wrinkled with dirt, your tangled hair
covering a smeared face that wears a painful frown.
A girl amiable to everyone in this little town,
now has fallen asleep too early too soon, even without
giving me a good-night hug, without, as usual, waiting
for me to tuck you up. I’ll not wake you up my child, but
gently I’ll clean your face with my tears, comb your hair
into a smooth ponytail and set the alarm clock for the dawn.
What’s in your dream? Homework? House chores?
Put them all aside for now because you are so tired.
Sleep well my child, sleep well in my arms…

2008-05-20 09:00:13
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钓月 ?2008-05-24 05:46:59?? 引用並回復


Impressed!

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Lake ?2008-05-25 18:54:04?? 引用並回復


谢谢。多批评。

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kino ?2008-06-01 18:58:58?? 引用並回復


那些孩子最让人揪心 Sad

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William Zhou周道模 ?2008-06-28 14:15:39?? 引用並回復


语流、语气、语感、语言有点像散文吧?

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Lake ?2008-06-29 00:22:46?? 引用並回復


William Zhou周道模 寫到:
语流、语气、语感、语言有点像散文吧?


谢谢。 是和我写的另外一首地震诗的风格不同。

有没有点像 lament?

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William Zhou周道模 ?2008-06-29 01:19:47?? 引用並回復


像流水一样的挽歌,学习了!

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mahuairong ?2008-07-22 06:43:21?? 引用並回復


马怀荣向你致敬!好诗!

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Lake ?2008-07-22 10:13:19?? 引用並回復


I'm flattered And cursed!

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