Maplereview Collections

zhangmin

???中国.江苏.张家港

?????192?

?????13 Mar 2007

?????Send private message

?????Send e-mail

?????http://yueguangfurong.51.com

Find all posts by zhangmin

???风走过,灯灭了,黑夜里你的烟雾尘埃在我的眼泪里。月光下的影子总为屋檐下的风铃疗伤。

现代诗歌
Post new topic   Reply to topic
新年

逃避一晚上,我的泪水
还是滴到母亲手上

疼痛,十指连心
终于,墙角的雪放心离去

我把哭泣存放
腊梅的脸上.刻画出微笑
母亲的,女儿的
欣慰与自豪
都为了父亲手中的炮仗

弟弟捂着耳朵
去偷看,姥姥压箱底的嫁衣
我的脚无法迈开大步

烟花被时光重叠
我把诺言挂在风上.随缘
婆婆的眼光,不再挑剔
老公带着儿子,抱起鲤鱼
走进娘家门


中国.江苏.张敏

2007-11-23 23:26:01
Reply with quote
古井 ?2007-11-24 08:14:10?? Reply with quote


冷峻的语言下面感情奔涌!

_________________
View user's profile     古井Collection
杯中冲浪 ?2007-11-24 16:06:06?? Reply with quote


断的厉害。

_________________
View user's profile     杯中冲浪Collection
杯中冲浪 ?2007-11-24 16:09:01?? Reply with quote


断的厉害。

_________________
View user's profile     杯中冲浪Collection
杯中冲浪 ?2007-11-24 16:22:28?? Reply with quote


断的厉害。

_________________
View user's profile     杯中冲浪Collection
zhangmin ?2007-11-24 16:53:45?? Reply with quote


谢谢古井,问好,远握.

_________________
View user's profile     zhangminCollection
zhangmin ?2007-11-24 16:54:50?? Reply with quote


谢谢杯中冲浪,远握.

_________________
View user's profile     zhangminCollection
赵福治 ?2007-11-24 17:18:59?? Reply with quote


逃避一晚上,我的泪水
还是滴到母亲手上

疼痛,十指连心
终于,墙角的雪放心离去 .......节制有弹性,喜欢前两节,多来交流.

_________________
View user's profile     赵福治Collection
zhangmin ?2007-11-24 20:13:24?? Reply with quote


谢谢,赵老师,希望推荐.

_________________
View user's profile     zhangminCollection