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满庭芳;蝶恋花;琐寒窗;金盏子令;七绝;荷叶铺水面;五律;恨来迟;燕归梁^_^

满庭芳

西苑传觞,东园劝酒,小丫脚、添菜拎壶。
柳眉桃脸,莲步似柔书。
袅袅依依款款,画月影、凌有凌无。
歌声起,娇莺诧燕,舞袖折双孤。

香风荷处举,开弦引管,收放容舒。
品指尖琴尾,颇乱酸儒。
可许溪流响谷,知几度、竹韵清疏。
常言道,朝云夕雨,相继识仙途。

2007-10-29 05:53:08
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征尘载袖 ?2007-10-29 05:59:32?? Reply with quote





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冰清 ?2007-10-29 10:31:57?? Reply with quote


感慨多多!

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莹雪 ?2007-10-29 18:06:29?? Reply with quote


婉转。^_^

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白水 ?2007-10-29 20:59:20?? Reply with quote


品指尖琴尾,颇乱酸儒。

有趣 Very Happy

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征尘载袖 ?2007-10-31 06:19:05?? Reply with quote


谢谢冰清老师、莹雪、白水姐姐^_^

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征尘载袖 ?2007-10-31 06:22:31?? Reply with quote


蝶恋花

一品玫瑰鲜果冻,腮满香甜,嘴角涎涎涌。
曾把绣兰罗帕共,难防一滴纤纤重。

脸上羞红心隐痛,游眼飘波,说有梧桐凤。
揉指捉襟闲摆弄,期谁度语庄公梦?

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黄洋界 ?2007-10-31 10:48:15?? Reply with quote


腮满香甜,游眼飘波,

袖袖诗词中不乏娇美的形象,避免了多少空泛之议.

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hepingdao ?2007-10-31 16:46:18?? Reply with quote


腮满香甜,嘴角涎涎涌。

揉指捉襟闲摆弄,期谁度语庄公梦

Very Happy

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qinghongh ?2007-10-31 18:14:44?? Reply with quote


载袖MM的词俏皮可爱,挥洒自如。真是长袖善舞啊!

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