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远方来信(双语) 黄娟

远方来信(双语)
黄娟
骤然间世界变小
骤然间世界变大
喜悦的心
高度膨胀

身边的空气骚动起来
蝴蝶飞舞
很亲切
花的世界因此更美丽

远方来信
如蝴蝶的心事
是美容师




The Letter From Far
by huangjuan
Suddenly the world smaller
Suddenly the world bigger
Happy heart
Expanding altitude

Air around me moving
Butterflies flying
The world of flowers therefore beautiful more

The letter from far
As something on butterflies's mind
Is a cosmetologist

2007-10-04 14:52:37
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William Zhou周道模 ?2007-10-04 15:19:11?? Reply with quote


far --- distance ? bigger --- larger ?

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jemmy ?2007-10-04 16:56:37?? Reply with quote


large的确用于体积空间等,我之所以用big,主要是想对应small,而且我觉得这么用仿佛有幽默感觉
far,在我想来更有诗意

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武靖东 ?2007-12-20 07:39:58?? 高度膨胀 Reply with quote


Happy heart
Expanding altitude


似乎Expanding to heavens
或Expanding outright好些:)

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