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中秋寄台湾雄章兄



中秋寄台湾雄章兄

又见孤鸿掠碧华,
依依两地叹天涯。
江楼把酒独对月,
莫使秋光摧落花。

2007-09-23 21:06:29
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老山 ?2007-09-23 21:39:56?? 更正 Reply with quote




<中秋寄台湾雄章兄>诗中"江楼把酒独对月"的"独"改作"孤":

又见孤鸿掠碧华,
依依两地叹天涯。
江楼把酒孤对月,
莫使秋光摧落花。

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冰清 ?2007-09-24 11:22:42?? Reply with quote


雾海云山看月华,
吟鞭东望是天涯。
断柯憀恨情难了,
诉怨相依叹落花

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老山 ?2007-09-24 18:10:51?? 冰清说得对 Reply with quote


冰清说得对,在中秋节,对于相隔天涯的每个人,都会有"断柯憀恨情难了,
诉怨相依叹落花"之感啊!

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白水 ?2007-09-25 04:47:20?? Reply with quote


http://oson.ca/viewtopic.php?t=8204

中秋快乐 Very Happy

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wenshan ?2007-10-02 19:24:46?? Reply with quote


良夕中秋赏月华,
婵娟千里共云涯。
登楼翘首乡心起,
一脉根连两岸花。

(加拿大/闻山2007)

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