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五绝·忆羊楼洞

羊楼洞——那个如今只在梦中出现的江南古镇,一别十六载,依旧难忘那俊秀的松峰山,古老的松峰茶,那幽深的古巷,那青石板街道,那老旧的木楼老屋,那潺潺的溪流上的石板小桥……)

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2007-07-20 23:36:36
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莹雪 ?2007-07-21 00:35:43?? Reply with quote


很喜欢结句。

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黄洋界 ?2007-07-21 10:39:07?? Reply with quote


与莹雪有同感,如此幽静的小镇,如此闲适的地方,令人神往.

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野航 ?2007-07-21 16:46:42?? Reply with quote


有感觉。

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荷梦 ?2007-07-22 23:54:12?? Reply with quote


谢三位评阅!

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kokho ?2007-07-23 08:18:52?? Reply with quote


well done my friend

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荷梦 ?2007-07-23 18:40:40?? Reply with quote


kokho wrote:
well done my friend

谢谢鼓励!

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