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命运的黄昏

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黄昏浸泡万物成同一种颜色
陌生的距离感静静注目,静静靠近
命运的对岸,一切已被说出

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向自己发问:
还能不能抵达黄昏?

命运从四面八方汹涌而至……

2007-07-19 01:05:42
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精湛小诗!提倡!欣赏!

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阿依琼裙 ?2007-07-20 00:01:04?? Reply with quote


短,精

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白水 ?2007-07-20 04:12:16?? Reply with quote


精湛

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杨海军 ?2007-07-20 14:42:21?? Reply with quote


向自己发问:
还能不能抵达黄昏?

命运从四面八方汹涌而至……

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奥冬 ?2007-07-21 02:25:42?? Reply with quote


谢过诸位的欣赏,问好

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江雪 ?2007-07-21 05:43:57?? Reply with quote


Shocked

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奥冬 ?2007-07-22 16:43:09?? Reply with quote


问好江雪兄

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