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鸟鸣与雷声

一只鸟站在窗棂
不停地鸣叫
一位年轻人卷曲在床
酣声压过鸟鸣

一串雷声击过来
鸟儿不见了
一位中年人走到窗前
把窗关上

一场雨被隔在窗外

2007,7,12

2007-07-16 11:32:11
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温馨

问好淡水

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感人的一幕

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温馨的窗景

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谢楼上三位斑竹阅评。
问候!

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