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发现

风，发现了树
心事都交给绿叶去说

树，发现了风
把天空摇得沙沙作响

我，发现了雨
看一片云无端地流泪

雨，发现了我
从眼里夺眶而出……

2007-06-16 01:12:14
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半溪明月 ?2007-06-16 02:29:14?? Reply with quote


不错的小诗~学习!

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阿依琼裙 ?2007-06-16 04:49:46?? Reply with quote


简洁,明了~~~

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韩少君 ?2007-06-16 14:12:33?? Reply with quote


欣赏！欢迎常来——

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南村 ?2007-06-16 15:44:13?? Reply with quote


谢谢鼓励

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