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听君又拾山中景,石上跃鸿影。

悠泉闲羽醉流连,涤却风尘,吐纳纵童年。

灯林欲谷淫声恶,魍魉眈身侧。

可寻桃符挂胸前?方寸桃园,守住寸方田。

2007-06-10 15:48:14
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暗香如沁 ?2007-06-12 02:36:43?? Reply with quote


欣赏.整体上阕好.问好.

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梅奈何 ?2007-06-12 15:59:48?? Reply with quote


暗香如沁 wrote:
欣赏.整体上阕好.问好.

多谢指点。

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