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浣溪沙：昙花

白日低头不敢开，羞将孤洁满山崖。幽香缕缕入人怀。 懒向牡丹夸国色，任凭初雪洒书斋。月明林下美人来！

2007-05-28 05:14:17
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暗香如沁 ?2007-05-28 05:27:34?? Reply with quote


诗很灵动．欣赏．

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蒹葭苍苍 ?2007-05-28 05:37:25?? Reply with quote


对仗有些欠妥，能改一下更好

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