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酒吧打架

酒吧打架

吵杂的音浪共胡扎的男人s(斯)如
五行山把去路拦住
你砸碎了酒杯,脚踝出了滴鲜血,如瑰红
静遂以光速冻结
住惊异的被动
摩西式的开裂图浮
脚踝之白皙能排山倒海
难怪有人为你打架,难怪刺挡不住叶的攀长

光离去,解穴后的男人s又成了哥儿们,意气如山
那不过就是个娘儿们(美丽的娘儿们)
罢了

2007-05-23 18:59:11
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桔子 ?2007-05-23 19:01:27?? Reply with quote


打架也能写诗 Rolling Eyes

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hepingdao ?2007-05-23 19:59:10?? Reply with quote


有意思

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