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再悼晓旭(新韵)

再悼晓旭(新韵)
绛草归天動地悲,瑶池路上叹紫薇。
天生晓旭一仙子,地咏红楼二度梅。
金玉无缘离轿远,佛禅有道觅花归。
常言大愿三生会,但得九霄再聚雷。

2007-05-19 00:33:21
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莹雪 ?2007-05-19 00:38:37?? Reply with quote


是啊,令人感叹。

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qxz-123456 ?2007-05-19 00:57:13?? Reply with quote


莹雪 wrote:
是啊,令人感叹。

问好莹雪

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暗香如沁 ?2007-05-19 07:46:02?? Reply with quote


再次欣赏.处处见悼念仙子之诗.感慨.

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qxz-123456 ?2007-05-19 19:28:33?? Reply with quote


暗香如沁 wrote:
再次欣赏.处处见悼念仙子之诗.感慨.

问好暗香。

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冰清 ?2007-05-19 22:53:52?? Reply with quote


咏叹感人!
据陈晓旭慈善基金会称: 晓旭一生广结善缘,乐善好施,先后捐款捐物数千万元。伊人逝去,爱留人间呵!

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qxz-123456 ?2007-05-20 05:16:40?? Reply with quote


暗香如沁 wrote:
再次欣赏.处处见悼念仙子之诗.感慨.

谢谢暗香,问好。

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qxz-123456 ?2007-05-20 05:18:13?? Reply with quote


冰清 wrote:
咏叹感人!
据陈晓旭慈善基金会称: 晓旭一生广结善缘,乐善好施,先后捐款捐物数千万元。伊人逝去,爱留人间呵!

好人,怀念。

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司马策风 ?2007-11-23 21:58:50?? Reply with quote


"天生晓旭一仙子,地咏红楼二度梅。
金玉无缘离轿远,佛禅有道觅花归"

颔联,略显简单直白.

腹联,含蓄有味,意境悠远.赞!

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