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火 光

火 光

田 斌

谁那么大的胆 是否带有几分怨恨与不屑
一大早 就擦亮了火柴
将黑夜这张巨大无边的纸点燃

火光烧去了昨夜的慵懒与缠绵
我昂首仰望 谁的手指点
一条通向远方的路通彻而明亮




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2007-05-06 11:02:57
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不错的意象

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司马策风 ?2007-05-06 19:11:16?? Reply with quote


生动形象。犹如一幅映象派的油画。

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晓辉 ?2007-05-06 19:13:49?? Reply with quote


振奋人心的火光,表达新颖

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xctianbin ?2007-05-08 16:25:55?? Reply with quote


问好!

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金金 ?2007-05-09 00:46:07?? Reply with quote


多写点儿”)

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