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送行

送行

破碎的词句充斥
回家的路

像星星做青蛙状跳跃
像飘零的琴声
击打我的脚步
像苍白的磷火
眩幻

我把它们一一捕获
放入口中

我得赶快 用它们
给我的灵魂上妆
今夜她是死神的新娘

2007-04-30 17:28:51
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hepingdao ?2007-04-30 18:32:55?? Reply with quote


今夜她是死神的新娘

这句写得太满了

我自己也会有这个问题
Very Happy

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阿依琼裙 ?2007-04-30 22:10:11?? Reply with quote


欣赏~~~

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远方有佳人 ?2007-05-01 00:22:11?? Reply with quote


节日快乐

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半溪明月 ?2007-05-01 09:35:32?? Reply with quote


节日问好! Very Happy

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