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回忆在雨季


轻梦杂糅着思绪

牵着匹迷途的老马

驮着几担沉重的往事

在巷尾忧郁的转来转去

几句梦话一样的方言

和着屋檐的滴水

代替了庸懒的鸡叫

在没有晨曦的黎明里抖颤

发潮的被单卷着几分睡意

破窗纸一样被揉成一团

记忆中

妈妈正撕扯着烂棉花

像在赶制新的被褥。。。。。。



梦是那样清晰的醒来的

却发现不是在昨天的老家


2007-04-22 05:17:40
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HAI KE YI

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GOWITHWIND ?2007-04-22 22:32:03?? 诗歌很有怀旧色彩 Reply with quote


牵着匹迷途的老马

驮着几担沉重的往事

在巷尾忧郁的转来转去

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GOWITHWIND ?2007-04-22 22:33:39?? Reply with quote


但最后一句有些突然
Laughing

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GOWITHWIND ?2007-04-26 18:23:17?? Reply with quote


让记忆随水
让往事随风
让思念留下来

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