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七律•两极分化(新韵)

七律•两极分化(新韵)
可怜漏里泥沙下,何避红尘败世风?
有志青年多晦养,无肠公子遍横行。
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独向灵台千万里,两极分化不聊生。

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伤时刺世,寒水忧心。

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警世之言

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最喜颔联、颈联!

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问好朋友们

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