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咏物三首

咏齿

洁白身似玉 坚劲若金刚
细咀频添味 三餐饭菜香

咏舌

搅海翻江力 如簧胜万兵
取香增百味 去秽自含英

咏髮

壮士冲冠退敌顽 花前蝶戏小云鬟
虔心济世崇高髻 皓首云山意自闲

2014-05-12 07:20:05
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qinghongh ?2014-05-12 15:28:34?? Reply with quote


黄老师的咏物诗很有特色,凡日常之物皆可咏入诗,形象有趣。

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Daxia ?2014-05-13 08:24:07?? Reply with quote


咏物形象意深邃,欣赏。

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黄洋界 ?2014-05-13 14:35:34?? Reply with quote


谢谢庆宏,daxia赏阅.

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笑聊 ?2014-05-16 22:44:06?? Reply with quote


贴切形象。

问候黄老师!

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黄洋界 ?2014-05-17 06:14:13?? Reply with quote


谢笑聊赏阅,问好笑聊!

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