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七律•拟住桃花岛

七律•拟住桃花岛
晓日鸡窗寒梦远,春风读过洗尘书。
南华经卷时高枕,东海桃花正笑舒。
碧草堤前呈烂漫,红颜身后转清虚。
一竿抛向烟波里,人钓轻风水跳鱼。

2014-04-14 01:44:41
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黄洋界 ?2014-04-14 07:30:30?? Reply with quote


全诗淡雅平和,桃花岛令人神往。
尤喜尾联,有物外之象。

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Daxia ?2014-04-14 10:18:26?? Reply with quote


“一竿抛向烟波里,人钓轻风水跳鱼。”
好境界,欣赏。

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qinghongh ?2014-04-14 13:17:05?? Reply with quote


仙境所在啊

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影沉寒水 ?2014-04-16 02:55:43?? Reply with quote


问好朋友们

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