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连南河2011-01-01 07:25:08

问候冷雨,新年快乐!

冷雨2010-12-25 03:19:51

问候连南河老师
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【声声慢】祈祷马航MH370  

【声声慢】祈祷马航MH370  

云端拭泪 似雾谜团 揪心沁入人怀 数十飞机船舰 巨浪生哀
无尽海天挂虑 月朦朦 日罩阴霾 笼罩在 水光波涛里 祈祷归来

二百三十九个 生灵与 家庭从此分开? 印度洋中灾难 苦痛谁猜?
黑匣又疑海下 六千多 米处深呆? 爱与恨 让凡间沉默 更问残骸?

【声声慢】双调九十九字,前段九句四平韵,后段八句四平韵

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【平仄韵注】词林正韵,○平●仄,◎应仄可平,⊙应平可仄。

April 4, 2013 Hormish Garden of Toronto(南河书院)4:00 - 6:00 pm

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“云端拭泪”,“巨浪生哀”
哀哉罹难,苦痛谁猜”!
连君哀挽,众人悲催。

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情真意切

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冷雨 ?2014-04-06 04:53:31?? Reply with quote


问好南河老师!

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笑聊 ?2014-04-11 22:19:21?? Reply with quote


问好连兄!由于好长时间上不来,故迟复了。望见谅!

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