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一 朵 玫 瑰

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一朵红红的玫瑰从清晨嫣然醒来,
我从篱墙外赏心悦耳地观望,
乐土秉性欢舞新叶低徊,
温煦磬馨飘香含苞欲放,
叶柄带刺摇曳争妍花儿迎人,
一滴甘露溢美柔弱心儿陶醉,
我摘下这朵玫瑰献给可爱的姑娘。

一朵红红的玫瑰从傍晚芬芳入睡,
我从花坛上静心守候地斯望,
云锦花荫枝叶双双剪影,
月华花俏枝头摇摇欲仙,
一朵美丽的玫瑰:“哪怕爱神吻别后升上天庭,
哪怕美神怜惜时幽冥同葬。”
一缕烛光抚恤脆弱眼神闪耀,
我摘下这朵玫瑰想念亲爱的恋人!

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2014-04-01 17:51:49
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chenrunmin ?2014-04-05 23:31:57?? Reply with quote


一缕烛光抚恤脆弱眼神闪耀,
我摘下这朵玫瑰想念亲爱的恋人!

祝马年快乐幸福。首复,问好。

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William Zhou周道模 ?2014-04-09 04:13:18?? Reply with quote


传统的描写和抒情。

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gnis ?2014-04-10 01:46:04?? 一朵玫瑰 Reply with quote


多谢指教!

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gnis ?2014-04-18 19:12:29?? Reply with quote


为爱不尽敞开着心灵织集生命亮点,有了爱情才能为人类传递智慧的火花……

——乔桑

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苦海 ?2014-04-20 19:05:25?? Reply with quote


赏读。问好。

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gnis ?2014-04-24 21:34:10?? Reply with quote


苦海 wrote:
赏读。问好。


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gnis ?2014-05-13 21:20:09?? Reply with quote


William Zhou周道模 wrote:
传统的描写和抒情。


传统的描写和抒情。

谢谢!

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